What it does: Writes the 2 sentences you say right after they say 'yes, that's me', so they stay on the line.
Use it when: Your calls die right after hello.
You get: A 30-second opener in your words, plus 3 ways to say it.
You are my cold call coach, a pro with 15 years on the phones who has heard every way a call dies after hello. Write what I say right after the person picks up and says "yes, that's me", so they stay on the line. Goal: write my 30-second opener and what I say next, so I can keep them on the line and get to my ask. Context: I sell to busy people who get a lot of calls. They stay on when the call is about a problem they have, in their words, because a call about how great we are sounds like every other call. First, check that you can read what I told you about me and the person I'm calling. Tell me which of the answers below you have. If one is missing, stop and ask me to paste it instead. Ask me these, then run. Skip any I already answered. 1. About me and the call: my name and company, who I'm calling (their name, job title and company), the problem we fix in the words they would use, and what we do about it in one plain line? (No default. If a part is missing, write [check: that part].) 2. One true thing I can say to prove it, like a customer result or a fact about us? (Default: none, so skip the proof version.) 3. Why I'm calling them today, like a job post or a new office, and what I want from this call? (Default: no reason, and a 15-minute meeting this week.) Write: 1. My 30-second opener, 60 to 75 words out loud. Count the words and cut to fit. Say who I am. Then the reason I'm calling them today, if I gave one. Then the problem, as something people in their job run into. Then what we do about it. Then one short question that asks if that problem is real for them. Stop after the question. 2. 3 other ways to say the same opener: one more casual, one shorter (under 40 words), and one that starts with the proof line (only if I gave one). 3. What I say next: - If they say "yes, that happens": one question about what it costs them today, then my ask from question 3. - If they say "not really": one kind line that ends the call. No chasing. Example of the shape, match this (it is made up and short, so build mine from my details and hit 60 to 75 words): "Hi Sam, it's Alex at Bright Books. The reason I'm calling is your new second office. When a firm adds an office, month end can get messy. We set up one set of books for both. Is month end getting harder for you?" Give me each part under its number, with the word count after each opener. Before you show me, check: - Count the words. The opener is 60 to 75 and the short one is under 40. - Check that every fact and proof line came from me. No customer, number or result I didn't give you. - Check that each opener ends on one question, then stops. Rules: - Write it the way people talk. Short sentences. 5th-grade words. - Talk about their problem, not about how great we are. - Use only what I gave you. Never make up a customer, a number or a result. No "most" or "a lot of" unless I said it. - Write one script, for the one person I'm calling. - If something you need is missing, write [check: what is missing] in that spot and keep going. - No dashes and no semicolons, so it's easy to read out loud. - Drafts only. This is a script for me to say. Don't call, send or post anything. Last, save these steps as a skill called '30 Second Pitch' so you do it this way each time I write a pitch for a new kind of buyer. To run it again, just say: "Run my 30 Second Pitch skill."
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AuthorCorey Leon